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:icondanaan-lugh:
There is an interesting crispness to your photo that is intriguing. The small splash of color from the ceiling lamp excites the earth tones of the surrounding wood tone. I prefer this shot to your black and white version. I am a huge fan of lines and intersection, and while there is an angular feel to the photo (mostly 90 degree angles), there is an occasional curve or alternate angle to keep things interesting.

I would also add that it's a wise choice to offset the lamp, rather than making it the central focus. Outside of a minor barrel distortion (very minor), this is delightful!
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:iconcccpk:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the thoughtful critique. I agree - I prefer this to the b/w version also.

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You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one. I hope someday you'll join us and the world will live as one. John Lennon "Imagine"
:icondanaan-lugh:
You're quite welcome, excellent work throughout your gallery!

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"Difficulties increase the nearer we get to the goal." - Goethe
:iconcccpk:
Thank you so much! Thanks, also, for the add :)
I'll gratefully return the favor. I am waaaay behind on viewing new postings, however...

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You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one. I hope someday you'll join us and the world will live as one. John Lennon "Imagine"
:icondanaan-lugh:
Not a problem, I truly enjoy your gallery... take your time, stop in whenever you can... I'm not going anywhere... :lmao:

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"Difficulties increase the nearer we get to the goal." - Goethe

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